Report Introduction

Walt: write a lead paragraph of a news report

  Report Introduction

Vinolia Tapa

On the 30th of April room six’s literacy teacher Mr Goodwin introduced a new technology that can control tetris on a computer. With some fruit, and a kit called the Makey makey kit, inside it was coloured wires and some small rectangle thing, to plug the wires to the fruit.

What I have learned was to write an lead paragraph of a news report. Yep just like on the walt at the top, and if you do not know what the walt stands for, it stands for we are learning to, and the you write what you learned.

Water cycle

Walt: Present information in different ways So what I have learned was how to present information in different ways, yep just like on the walt. And if you do not know what the walt stands for, it stands for we are learning to, and then you write what you are learning.

Immersion assembly

Walt: use different types of sentences to improve writing

Introduction

Have you ever had people cooking in your school assembly before? well that is what happened today at our Immersion assembly. there were teachers and  prefects cooking s'mores and mini pikelets, and they were handing it around to the kids who’s sitting up.

P1-

As I took one step in the breeze I could smell all of the yummy pikelets being handed to students. Ohoo yeah I was late when my class lined up to go to the assembly. I also saw a droun being controlled by a perfect, the school

had a new topic which was named Tinkering tools and toys.

P2-

On the first team which was team one, had also provided some carrots,celery,sandwiches, well that is all that I saw on the plates. Ohh I have another thing to tell you there team which is team1 the teachers were dressed up in Minions on the movie despicable me.  

P3-

So off to the next  team which is  team two, and they were doing a show about Winnie the poo and his friends helping his other friend which was Epyon, helping him build his own house. And the way he was talking was so hilarious. Now we should move on to team 3  

P4-

They just had a little movie and they were dressed in minions. So now its on our witch is team 4, all that our teacher, Mr Somerville did was just talk about how we will be making video games. Now its time for team 5, do what they did was all of them was dressed as a soldier, and most of them were screaming so it was really loud.

Conclusion

So I will have to say that my favourite team would have to be, team five. Because as soon as they scam I looked at the people and their faces had an reaction. So if you had to pick one of the teams comment down below, saying which team you like.

So what I have learned was how to use different tips of sentence to improve my writing. Yep just like the walt. So if you do not know what the walt stands for, it stands for we are learning to, and then you write what you are learning about.

XBOXONE

Walt: identify the main points in the text   

What I have learned was to identify the main points in the text. Yeah just like on the walt, and if you do not know what the walt stands for, it stands for we are learning to, and then you write what you have learned about.

Remembering Anzac

Walt: to understand the meaning of anzac

Anzac

Do you know what anzac stands for? well it stands for Australia New Zealand army corps, that is what it stands for.  Well we will be remembering the death of thousands of men going to fight for us. And yes we are going to memorize today and tomorrow for the death of men for us.

Introduction

Walt  write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Introduction

Have you ever had people cooking in your school assembly before? well that is what happened today at our Immersion assembly. there were teachers and  prefects cooking s'mores and mini pikelets, and they were handing it around to the kids who’s sitting up.

Marked by Patricia

What I have learned from the terms first introduction was how to write a detailed with a hook and a orientation just like the walt at the top.

Oh I also learned how to write a complex and simple sentence.