Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
Has your teacher fed you worms in your life? Well our literacy teacher did and his name was Mr Goodwin, He was so harlreyes that when he made the magic worms he was rubbing them all over our faces that we got worm juice on our face.
What I learned is to write a complex simple sentence, Then a long sentence at the end.
Hi I am Patience, I really think that is weird eating worms and getting worm juice on your face but it might be a weird experience and scary at first but in the end it will all go away. What did it taste like ? and how did you feel?
Hi I am Patience,
ReplyDeleteI really think that is weird eating worms and getting worm juice on your face but it might be a weird experience and scary at first but in the end it will all go away.
What did it taste like ? and how did you feel?